Friday, May 21, 2010
main character Backstory
Mr.Universal back story is was born thousands of years ago. He wasn't born normally he was out of the universe and was able to control it. He crash landed as a grown man on earth in Russia.The ambulance took him to the hospital and when he woke up and went on a rampage. He left the hospital and team up with other evil people with power.They plan to invade Russia for there toxic devices and satellite.
Wednesday, May 19, 2010
sample Chapter
After Joining the team they went to look to recruit other heroes. One day in a bar they found a guy that was super strong they asked him his name and he said Block. They ask him if he wants to join the team and he said yeah. They found this hot head a few weeks later they had to hunt him down because he ran but when we caught him said he works alone but after awhile they talked him into joining his name was Sky. This other guy they found while the were flying over the ocean. This was arguing with this other and said that he is a god so went down to talk to him and he said that he is a god his name was Core, he said he can control fire and the core of the Earth.
They were taking back to a secret sector that is so secret that the military doesn't even know about. The leader introduced himself as Carter.he said that he will give the command of them but Ultimate will be leader of the team. The rest of the team got mad because the thought they should be the leader, Carter said "he is the leader because he is the best out of all of them and has the most leadership skill now shut up and listen." He said that they will be doing a training session and there will be 7 waves of robots. They went to were they will be fighting and the training session started.The first wave was easy and the blew by them.The second wave was a little harder but still easy for them. The third wave was hard but got through in a struggle. The forth wave Sky went down and was knocked out but the rest of them got through it. The fifth wave Block went out and Core and Ultimate was left. The sixth wave Core went down and ultimate was the only one left. The seventh and final wave was extremely hard and ultimate was the only one left and had to defend himself at the end Ultimate came out a winner and completed the whole training session.
The next day They were called in for their first mission. Carter said there was a problem about some strange people stole some bomb and toxic devices also the are terrorizing people in Russia. They have to get over a sap. Ultimate asked how are we going to get there,Carter said "a super speed jet of course." When they got to the jet they were amazed and they got right in the jet.They took of and was on their way to Russia. When they got to the place, they had to land away from the place and had to walk it. When they finally got to the place they had to help people and they had to split up to find people how did this.Core found the first person he beat him up and took him hostage. Then Block found somebody just like him and beat him down and knock him out and tied up with the other guy. Sky found the other and almost got beat up but he was able to knock him out and tie him up. Ultimate found the last one and looked like the mastermind of the situation. It was a good fight but Ultimate came out in top and tied them up to bring all of them back to the sector for information. They told them their names and they were Bulk, Mr. Universal, Ice and shape shifter. After they the information they sent them to a high security jail on a small island. A couple of days later the news came out that people broke out of jail and they were the people that they put in jail and more people also that they might add to the team. The next couple of days it was just training and they were getting better and better. Then one day they got a mission of regular people killing people in South America. When they got there they caught the people how were killing the other people and help the wounded and took the killers to jail for life.
One day The secret sector heard news of Mr.Universal with is army was building machine that can get them under mind control so he could take over the world. If they went to fight now they would lose because they would be out numbered. So Carter thought of a idea of making super strong robots that can resist anything. It might take awhile but it would be done before Mr.Universals machine and that will give them enough time to stop his evil plan and bring the world to peace. Everybody was helping out the robots with the testing and the making. They were going to be made out of titanium so they would be hard to break and destroy. They will be able to resist heat up to the heat of the core,it would be able to stand any temperature,it will be so strong it would be able to left up 2 million tons. Finally they were done and they were ready to go and fight. They found out the machine was in North Dakota. They had to use 2 jets to fit everybody and they finally got they found it right on top of a mountain and Mr.Universals army surrounding the mountain. They made a plan to rush them and to go straight for Mr.Universal. Ultimate was leading the charge and they took off and collided with the other army and the fight broke out. Ultimate was busting through everybody so fast because of his super speed and strength and also claws. The machine was finally finished and Mr.Universal was so close to taking over the world. Ultimate used his speed to get up the mountain but Mr.Universal slowed down time but Ultimate was so fast that he was still going fast up the mountain and when he got to Mr.Universal he destroyed the machine. Then he went for Mr.Universal and beat him up. At the end Ultimate sliced his head off and the rest of his army was done. So, Ultimate army won the fight. They went back to the sector to relax and celebrate.
They were taking back to a secret sector that is so secret that the military doesn't even know about. The leader introduced himself as Carter.he said that he will give the command of them but Ultimate will be leader of the team. The rest of the team got mad because the thought they should be the leader, Carter said "he is the leader because he is the best out of all of them and has the most leadership skill now shut up and listen." He said that they will be doing a training session and there will be 7 waves of robots. They went to were they will be fighting and the training session started.The first wave was easy and the blew by them.The second wave was a little harder but still easy for them. The third wave was hard but got through in a struggle. The forth wave Sky went down and was knocked out but the rest of them got through it. The fifth wave Block went out and Core and Ultimate was left. The sixth wave Core went down and ultimate was the only one left. The seventh and final wave was extremely hard and ultimate was the only one left and had to defend himself at the end Ultimate came out a winner and completed the whole training session.
The next day They were called in for their first mission. Carter said there was a problem about some strange people stole some bomb and toxic devices also the are terrorizing people in Russia. They have to get over a sap. Ultimate asked how are we going to get there,Carter said "a super speed jet of course." When they got to the jet they were amazed and they got right in the jet.They took of and was on their way to Russia. When they got to the place, they had to land away from the place and had to walk it. When they finally got to the place they had to help people and they had to split up to find people how did this.Core found the first person he beat him up and took him hostage. Then Block found somebody just like him and beat him down and knock him out and tied up with the other guy. Sky found the other and almost got beat up but he was able to knock him out and tie him up. Ultimate found the last one and looked like the mastermind of the situation. It was a good fight but Ultimate came out in top and tied them up to bring all of them back to the sector for information. They told them their names and they were Bulk, Mr. Universal, Ice and shape shifter. After they the information they sent them to a high security jail on a small island. A couple of days later the news came out that people broke out of jail and they were the people that they put in jail and more people also that they might add to the team. The next couple of days it was just training and they were getting better and better. Then one day they got a mission of regular people killing people in South America. When they got there they caught the people how were killing the other people and help the wounded and took the killers to jail for life.
One day The secret sector heard news of Mr.Universal with is army was building machine that can get them under mind control so he could take over the world. If they went to fight now they would lose because they would be out numbered. So Carter thought of a idea of making super strong robots that can resist anything. It might take awhile but it would be done before Mr.Universals machine and that will give them enough time to stop his evil plan and bring the world to peace. Everybody was helping out the robots with the testing and the making. They were going to be made out of titanium so they would be hard to break and destroy. They will be able to resist heat up to the heat of the core,it would be able to stand any temperature,it will be so strong it would be able to left up 2 million tons. Finally they were done and they were ready to go and fight. They found out the machine was in North Dakota. They had to use 2 jets to fit everybody and they finally got they found it right on top of a mountain and Mr.Universals army surrounding the mountain. They made a plan to rush them and to go straight for Mr.Universal. Ultimate was leading the charge and they took off and collided with the other army and the fight broke out. Ultimate was busting through everybody so fast because of his super speed and strength and also claws. The machine was finally finished and Mr.Universal was so close to taking over the world. Ultimate used his speed to get up the mountain but Mr.Universal slowed down time but Ultimate was so fast that he was still going fast up the mountain and when he got to Mr.Universal he destroyed the machine. Then he went for Mr.Universal and beat him up. At the end Ultimate sliced his head off and the rest of his army was done. So, Ultimate army won the fight. They went back to the sector to relax and celebrate.
Plot outline
Introduction
a.It takes place in the United States.It takes place in the future.
b.Ultimate and Mr.Universal.
c.No.
Rising Action
a.Ultimate has super speed,super strength and grow titanium swords out of his knuckles.Mr.Universal can control the world.
b.Ultimate wants to destroy Mr.Universal.He wants that because Mr.Universal wants to take over the world.they care because billions of people will be killed or tortured.
Climax
a.The last fight with Ultimate's team and Mr.Universal's team.
b.He can relax and be happy because the world would be at peace.
Falling Action
a.The direct results is the world is safe and evil is destroyed.
b.The main Character reaction is he is happy and is at peace.
Resolution
a.The main character learns that being evil can have a big price to pay and good is the way to go.
b.The character will go home and chill with his friends and family in happiness and peace
a.It takes place in the United States.It takes place in the future.
b.Ultimate and Mr.Universal.
c.No.
Rising Action
a.Ultimate has super speed,super strength and grow titanium swords out of his knuckles.Mr.Universal can control the world.
b.Ultimate wants to destroy Mr.Universal.He wants that because Mr.Universal wants to take over the world.they care because billions of people will be killed or tortured.
Climax
a.The last fight with Ultimate's team and Mr.Universal's team.
b.He can relax and be happy because the world would be at peace.
Falling Action
a.The direct results is the world is safe and evil is destroyed.
b.The main Character reaction is he is happy and is at peace.
Resolution
a.The main character learns that being evil can have a big price to pay and good is the way to go.
b.The character will go home and chill with his friends and family in happiness and peace
Tuesday, May 18, 2010
Main Character biography
Ultimate's back story is he was born with something wrong with his legs. When he was 18 years old they finally figured out a way to fix his leg so they put a device in his legs and the device was so strong it made him have super speed. Then one day he was walking and fell into toxic waste and it almost killed him. The nearest hospital pick him up and took him to the hospital. When he woke up he went on a rampage and realized that he was super strong. Then later on that day he got real mad at this guy because he punched his friend and made a fist and made a muscle and two long Titanium swords came out came out of his knuckle in both hands. Then the guy ran away. Then the swords went back in his hands. The next day a guy came up to Ultimate and told him about a team called the Ultimatums and that he would be the leader and he accepted the offer.
Wednesday, May 12, 2010
main characters of my novel
My main characters are the, Ultimate, Mr.Universal
Ultimate: super strong, super fast, godly, smart
Mr.Universal: Super strong, smart, powerful, evil, godly
Ultimate: super strong, super fast, godly, smart
Mr.Universal: Super strong, smart, powerful, evil, godly
Tuesday, February 9, 2010
The last Orangutan (question)
#4 The detail that show that Galdikas is motivated more than scientists by orangutan because when the author mentions that she was inspired by a famous paleontologist named Louis Leakey tom spend her entire life among nonhuman primates.
#3 they probably did that because they wanted to introduce the Orangutan to her before she comes into their lives to help them.
#5. One day a week before I went to kindergarten me ,my mom and dad were looking for closed in a store and I thought that was boring so I started hide from so they wouldn't see me I hid under clothes lines and one time I ran down the same aisle as them and then i looked back at them to see if they saw me but once I turned around bang I ran into a big metal shelve and busted my eyebrow open and it was bloody it was real close to my eye.If I was a little taller I would be missing a eye.This paragraph show you that you shouldn't play in stores because you can really hurt yourself like me or worse.
#3 they probably did that because they wanted to introduce the Orangutan to her before she comes into their lives to help them.
#5. One day a week before I went to kindergarten me ,my mom and dad were looking for closed in a store and I thought that was boring so I started hide from so they wouldn't see me I hid under clothes lines and one time I ran down the same aisle as them and then i looked back at them to see if they saw me but once I turned around bang I ran into a big metal shelve and busted my eyebrow open and it was bloody it was real close to my eye.If I was a little taller I would be missing a eye.This paragraph show you that you shouldn't play in stores because you can really hurt yourself like me or worse.
Friday, January 15, 2010
how Byron changes in The Watson go to Birmingham
Byron is the older brother of Kenny. Byron treats Kenny like a normal older brother. Byron is a jerk to Kenny and disrespectful to his parents while they were in Flint MIchigan.
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